- They kept destroying his furniture ie. curtains and chairs, they also drove away any visitors and ruined their owners, Victor’s relationships.
- “He had literally given away everything in his life to rehabilitate these dogs” He took them on 6 mile walks.
- Victoria helped Victor with training, replaced the furniture to stop them destroying all of it. She also showed him a way to walk the dogs.
- After Victoria’s help the dogs started behaving and Victor decided to not return them to the animal shelter.
- Victor is a very passionate pet owner, he had spent a lot of money, time and even his social life for his dogs. He is a perfect pet owner in my opinion
Very good job!
VastaaPoistaA couple errors I noticed:
- "their owners, Victor's" -> their owner Victor's OR their owner's, Victor's,
- "6 mile walks" -> 6-mile walks
- "Victor decided to not return" -> Victor decided not to return
- "spent a lot of money... for his dogs" -> spent a lot of money... on his dogs
Well done!